Angel of Death

Hey J! I am not losing interest in this, but I will say that everything seems like it's going a little to fast. Just pace yourself Jare, you have all ...

Hey Night! I think this might be the first thing I'm reading by you. But there's really nothing for me to critique because it looks like everyone else picked out ...

Hey Jare-bear! I really really liked this. As Ky said, you've really matured literary wise. It was something new from what you usually do and I like your MC. But ...

I cried as well. That speech was great and he just have this calm, serious but understanding feel to him and I can tell that he's going to be a ...

Really cool idea and we have so much in common! 1. I am in love with anything that has to do with Johnny Depp, including him. 2. My favorite color ...

Wow, when you edit you really edit! This was way better than the first draft and your character is twice as good as she was the last time. Everything flowed ...

Note: I know I have so many ideas and things that I haven't continued but I've learned to except that I need to pay attention to every new idea or ...

Here I am again! This is really going slower than I thought. Finals really do take away from my reviewing time, but anyways off to the critique. Or maybe he ...

Hello there, dear! I don't think we've met before but I'm Angel of Death, but please call me Angel. Well, my, I think...I can't stop crying. This was really good! ...

Hey Ash! I saw you posted something new and I had to come check it out and you didn't disappoint. It was cute and the MC kinda reminded me of ...

Hmm? Incest stories are really common but if you tweak it and make it your own, I don't see why it wouldn't be readable. Sure, the subject is a little ...

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Awe, Kirsten, you're so sweet. You really made me cry with this critique and I'm so glad you liked it. Yay, I was hoping ...

Hey Evi!, I'm Angel of Death but yo can me Angel. I really liked this. It was well written and I can feel Alex's emotions and you're very talented. I ...

Hello there! Welcome to YWS! I'm Angel of Death but please call me Angel, everyone else does. I hope you stay here in this wonderful community of writers because I've ...

Hello Jennifina! I quite liked this. It is one of my favorite Greek myths and I think you captured the gist of everything fairly well (if that was your intention) ...